🔧 Fixed Version: This version preserves your authentic voice by removing the destructive verb replacements that turned natural language into robotic prose. Only truly weak constructions are targeted.
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✅ Voice Preserved: This version maintains your natural conversational tone while fixing mechanical violations. Your authentic voice remains intact.
The Seven-Pass Methodology (Voice-Preserving)
- Passive Voice Detection: Identify and mark passive constructions for manual review
- Adverb Removal: Remove "-ly" modifiers that weaken prose (preserves essential ones)
- Sentence Length Control: Break sentences over 17 words for optimal readability
- Redundant Modifier Stripping: Remove qualifiers that add no information
- Personal Voice Consistency: Ensure first-person narrative throughout
- Weak Verb Fixing: Target only genuinely pompous/bureaucratic language
- Imperative Mood Conversion: Transform prose into actionable methodology